Yoko Taro’s Manga “Thou Shalt Not Die” Could Still be Part of the Yokoverse

In today’s issue of Famitsu magazine, we were treated to a 14-page feature on NieR:Automata detailing more on its development, discussions by the creative and development team, plus we were given one more tease that there is still some “secret” left undiscovered within the game. As the teasers about this have stated, you are apparently able to zoom out the camera by pressing R3+using the directional buttons in order to “bug out” the camera… if you do that, you’re apparently able to see something that would be “very bad” and yet the dev team didn’t bother to remove or fix it because it felt very “NieR-esque”. xD

Now back to the topic at hand. In this issue of Famitsu, we are given a development timeline that details all the important points in Automata’s development. This includes things such as the YoRHa Ver.1.0 stage play in October 2014, the demo release in December 2016, and the NieR:Automata collaboration with Valkyrie Anatomia -The Origin-. All of the points listed in this timeline have *something* to do directly with Automata. That is why this is very curious:

The KimiShini – Zero stage play performed 9 shows up until Christmas day in 2016. The story was a prequel to the manga series. I wrote a long review and speculation piece regarding the manga and how it could relate to NieR here, but for the purposes of this post, I will take those ideas and outline them below. There may be some copy and pasting going on from the original post that I linked above.


  • The world has been thrown into chaos, but we don’t know exactly what is going on beyond the fact that fossil fuels are in serious demand, which has then triggered international conflicts and war.
  • Japan is unable to actively get involved in any international war because of its “self-defense only” constitution, but it also tries to bypass these restrictions by touting the NPO guise (more on this below).
  • Japan is desperate to protect itself from the rest of the world, so a drug is developed to give people “special abilities”, but the adults that took it lived no longer than 30 minutes after taking the drug before their brain literally explodes; however, if young people take the drug, their bodies are able to withstand the side affects and obtain seemingly random special abilities. Note: This sounds very much like the drug Luciferase in NieR.
  • This is why young adults are sought after to become test subjects. But the problem was finding suitable candidates for the project whilst putting on the guise that nothing illegal or unconstitutional is going on. This is why they use the guise of NPO work in foreign countries to get more recruits into the program. Likewise, any test runs of the kids’ abilities had to be carefully choreographed as to not be overly suspicious. Many “coverups” also resulted, such as with the opening conflict in Brazil when nearly the entire squad is killed–the whole thing was said to be the result of an unfortunate plane crash.
  • A school is set up to train these young people to learn how to use their special abilities. They are divided into three types: Short-range, Long-range, and Analysis… Pretty much the same as the three initial types of YoRHa androids: Attacker, Gunner, and Scanner. This is why I used the YoRHa type names in my translation of the manga.
  • The Enemy: It’s never said in the manga thus far, but they could be the Legion. They appear to be human but they have become infected with the White Chlorination Syndrome (WCS) and have entered into a pact with the god in order to remain “alive”. Or they could be a man-made enemy created through experimenting with drugs like  Luciferase.
  • Another important thing to mention is the true reason the kids were coerced into participating in the experiment in various ways (KimiShini -ZERO- stage play). In the end the mad-scientist Suou stated that it was to gather data on the kids’ performance in battle. It matters little if they survive; actually, they get better data if they die… This is exactly like the early YoRHa experiments, ie. the Pearl Harbor Descent Mission. The YoRHa are essentially pawns created to be destroyed in order to obtain valuable data for new androids.
  • The main heroine of the story, Mashiro, seems to be involved in a secret study called Project White. Mashiro is one of the “special abilities” students who was given superhuman strength. She’s able to easily crush or break through objects, receive multiple bullet wounds and still survive… and she also has “red eye” moments where blood pours from her eyes and she goes on a mindless rampage against anything or anyone in her way–friend or foe.
  • Update: With the release of Chapter 34 today, March 25, they’ve actually dropped a YoRHa term in the narrative. Yanagi explains that he has two unique abilities: the power to copy and another to cancel out others’ powers, the latter of which he dubs as the power of a “Canceller”. This term was dropped in the original YoRHa stage play back in October 2014.

◼ Further Speculation

  • I believe Mashiro and everyone are part of the “5th Crusade” that is talked about in the DOD/NieR timeline. They were deployed to Brazil and were nearly completely decimated in the battle with the Legion. We know that Mashiro’s unit was deployed somewhere in South America, but it’s never stated exactly who their adversaries are in the manga.
  • There may be a direct connection to some of these kids and the 13 Grimoire tomes. I originally speculated that Kuroi and Mashiro might be related to Grimoire Noir and Grimoire Weiss, respectively, but after reading the short story “And Then There Were None”, I believe it’s safe to say that we have not met the BOY who became Weiss nor the GIRL who became Rubrum. Three other tomes that were referenced to in the novella were the Amber, Emerald, and Azure tomes.
  • The drugs the kids are taking are probably the Luciferase that’s talked about in the DOD/NieR timeline. It was made from particles of “Maso” that would slow the effects of the White Chlorination Syndrome and was very effective to give young children magic-like abilities. This was not a cure for the disease, however.

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◼ So, long story, short

I don’t see why the KimiShini play would be listed in the development timeline for NieR:Automata if it didn’t have some direct connection.


The manga has now concluded with no definitive answers… except… for a tease from Yoko. Read more on that here.

Regarding My Translations of Yoko Taro’s “Thou Shalt Not Die” Manga

“Are you still translating ‘Thou Shalt Not Die’?”

→No, unfortunately I’m not. I stopped my fan work on the series and delete everything because it was officially licensed by Yenpress, as it was stated at Anime Expo 2017. Please check out the clip of the official announcement and my editorial about it below!

  • I have made summaries of additional chapters here.

Editorial:
This is where I get super picky about the details, so please excuse me.
(spoilers may be present)

Audience Member: How about the author?
Panel Spokesperson: The author?
Audience Member: Yeah.
Panel Spokesperson: In terms of…?
Audience Member: What else he’s done.
Panel Spokesperson: -intelligible- We will look into that.

As a fan of Yoko Taro and his previous works and also one who has been working on the unofficial English releases of this series, this passage was nothing more than CRINGE. They didn’t know who the author was or what his prior works were? What about the illustrator!? Those are the TWO most important things that you *need* to state when you’re introducing a new series. The story synopsis ought to come later.

And that summary about the story…. makes me very leery if they even read any of it. They probably just skimmed through the pages to look at the artwork. “Ohh, it’s a military story. I see. Oh, they’re kids with special abilities. Ok. I got it. We’re all set for the announcement!”

When you introduce a new series you MUST do the following:

  • State the author and his prior works
  • State the illustrator and his prior works
  • Briefly explain the plot of the story, given what is already known

Knowing NOTHING about the author or even stating the illustrator’s name is beyond unconscionable for the first official announcement of this sort. Please do your due diligence before holding conferences like this. You want stuff to sell, don’t you???

Panel Spokesperson: They are being trained to fight in the war.

My problem is with the phrasing “the war”, which suggests there is one, singular war. There has been NO STATEMENT regarding a specific war in the total 27 current chapters. None other than that the world’s resources have been depleted to a dangerous level, causing international relations to plummet and tensions to rise.

If you’ve read my speculation in how this story connects to the early timeline from NieR…then maybe you can see where the story’s going, but they should not have stated anything about a specific war at all.

I sent YenPress an email and tweeted at them on September 1, 2019 and received no response. This was not the first time that I have contacted them regarding this topic.

EDIT: August 2020

On August 25, 2020, the manga has concluded with 59 chapters. With literally no word from Yenpress after their initial announcement, it may be that Square Enix has rescinded their license to release the manga and will be releasing it themselves as part of their new Manga & Books label. The manga has already been released there in Japanese.

This is Square Enix’s Manga & Books English page.


EDIT: May 23, 2021

A friend of mine just reached out to me regarding a recent inquiry to YenPress regarding the status of TSND, and this is what I was sent:

I believe this contact was made just a couple days ago, so this is the newest insight that we’ve heard since 2017 when YenPress announced they were planning on releasing the manga series in English…

This, of course, does not mean that an English release is entirely out of the picture. On the contrary, Square Enix has since started up their own self-publishing label “Manga & Books”, so it may be likely that they well release the series that way rather than relying on a out-sourced third-party.

At any rate, I will continue to inform everyone on any updates that I may hear regarding this! Let’s hope something gets announced soon!!

Lastly, for simple posterity sake, here’s the final screen shot of the counter that I had running ever since YenPress announced that they would be licensing the English version of TSND… Alas, it is no more… It has now been 3 years, 10 months, and 22 days since their announcement… Wish we could have been told what was up sooner…

Kimi Shini Signed Poster by Yoko Taro and Moriyama Daisuke

Big GanGan and Square Enix recently hosted a giveaway for a large signed poster by Yoko Taro and Moriyama Daisuke for their manga series “Kimi Shi ni Tamou Koto Nakare // Thou Shalt Not Die” that was advertised in this live broadcast:

Toward the end of the broadcast, they introduced a hashtag on twitter to participate in the giveaway, which of course, I did!

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